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Offline emi

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Re: Poetry by the members!
« Reply #30 on: May 25, 2009, 05:20:53 pm »
lol whats to blush about ?
i think you have great skill of writing poems carry on .. i would love to see a blog full of your poems ;D 

ever thought of making one ?
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Re: Poetry by the members!
« Reply #31 on: May 25, 2009, 05:22:23 pm »
I've written so much-but as usual - afraid to post it, for fear it will be passed on by others :S

Ang yeah IG girl, great poem! :)
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oh churiyaan charha dey..
oh mehndiya kara dey..
oh jhanjara pawan dey...
On the dance floor oh mundiye...Nach Baliye!

--~*O yaara dhol bajaake.. O yaara jashan mana ke!!




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Re: Poetry by the members!
« Reply #32 on: May 25, 2009, 05:28:18 pm »
Quote from: angell on May 25, 2009, 05:22:23 pm
I've written so much-but as usual - afraid to post it, for fear it will be passed on by others :S

Ang yeah IG girl, great poem! :)

Thanks...
and try posting them..it's only a poem!!
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If i fall along the way pick me up and dust me off...and if i get too tired to make it..be my breath so i can walk!!

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Re: Poetry by the members!
« Reply #33 on: May 25, 2009, 06:00:09 pm »
WOW!! AWESOME!!! especially the Moonlight one!! Keep it up!! :)
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Re: Poetry by the members!
« Reply #34 on: May 25, 2009, 06:00:39 pm »
:D thanks

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oh churiyaan charha dey..
oh mehndiya kara dey..
oh jhanjara pawan dey...
On the dance floor oh mundiye...Nach Baliye!

--~*O yaara dhol bajaake.. O yaara jashan mana ke!!




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Re: Poetry by the members!
« Reply #35 on: May 25, 2009, 06:08:07 pm »
Nice poem girl!!! Liked it very much!
Go on!
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Offline astarmathsandphysics

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Re: Poetry by the members!
« Reply #36 on: May 25, 2009, 06:11:04 pm »
I do postery with effect

I sent a girl 3 texts one after the other while i was out sailing once.

I am sailing

I am sinking


I am swimming

To be near you

To be free
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Re: Poetry by the members!
« Reply #37 on: May 25, 2009, 06:13:48 pm »
That's my first poem i worte...

No matter what you do
Nothing is really appreciated
tears like crystals went running down my face
hoping that it would clear my history
and start a brand new page
A person shouldn't forget exactly like a robot machine
No emotions or feelings
No heart to think of healing
I do my best and the world i blind
Am I the only one who could see this shine??

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Re: Poetry by the members!
« Reply #38 on: May 25, 2009, 06:14:51 pm »
Quote from: astarmathsandphysics on May 25, 2009, 06:11:04 pm
I do postery with effect

I sent a girl 3 texts one after the other while i was out sailing once.

I am sailing

I am sinking


I am swimming

To be near you

To be free


Simple but nice loool
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Re: Poetry by the members!
« Reply #39 on: May 25, 2009, 06:16:23 pm »
Amazing astar :P a lot of talent!!hahahaha...

n YEP -  i like, IG girl!
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oh churiyaan charha dey..
oh mehndiya kara dey..
oh jhanjara pawan dey...
On the dance floor oh mundiye...Nach Baliye!

--~*O yaara dhol bajaake.. O yaara jashan mana ke!!




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Re: Poetry by the members!
« Reply #40 on: May 25, 2009, 06:17:52 pm »
What about this chat up line for dogs

I hate dogs.

I 'ATE 'EM

I like 'em really

It does work on dogs. Not on cats though
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Re: Poetry by the members!
« Reply #41 on: May 25, 2009, 06:20:15 pm »
Quote from: astarmathsandphysics on May 25, 2009, 06:17:52 pm
What about this chat up line for dogs

I hate dogs.

I 'ATE 'EM

I like 'em really

It does work on dogs. Not on cats though

r these poems??!!! becuz if yes, sorry Sir but they r bad!!lol!!
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Re: Poetry by the members!
« Reply #42 on: May 25, 2009, 06:23:32 pm »
astar - what poetry!! hahahahhaha...!!

great pick up lines though ;)
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oh churiyaan charha dey..
oh mehndiya kara dey..
oh jhanjara pawan dey...
On the dance floor oh mundiye...Nach Baliye!

--~*O yaara dhol bajaake.. O yaara jashan mana ke!!




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Re: Poetry by the members!
« Reply #43 on: May 25, 2009, 06:30:20 pm »
Everyone has a specific destination
It comes from ambitions and a touch of determination
This poem might influence some or even improve a whole nation
Prospective changes,goes through a whole different station
It only requires some cleverness and loads of patiences
We possess enough confident, We're not medical patients
Our world needs us and this is why im anxious
We need to step up and determine some certain cases
Spread peace all around...decrease evil's traces
We need to step up..it's our turn to reveal our real faces
It's time to improve our knowledge of basics!!
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If i fall along the way pick me up and dust me off...and if i get too tired to make it..be my breath so i can walk!!

Monica

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Re: Poetry by the members!
« Reply #44 on: May 25, 2009, 06:32:25 pm »
Quote from: IG girl on May 25, 2009, 06:30:20 pm
Everyone has a specific destination
It comes from ambitions and a touch of determination
This poem might influence some or even improve a whole nation
Prospective changes,goes through a whole different station
It only requires some cleverness and loads of patiences
We possess enough confident, We're not medical patients
Our world needs us and this is why im anxious
We need to step up and determine some certain cases
Spread peace all around...decrease evil's traces
We need to step up..it's our turn to reveal our real faces
It's time to improve our knowledge of basics!!

OK this once is really goooood!! i really liked it!!
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