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Re: Poetry by the members!
« Reply #15 on: May 25, 2009, 02:09:32 pm »
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAH ....


lol okay sorry. but tht was my raaction wen I read emi's reply from Snitty's poem ... lol.. sorry mate,.. but that was HILLLARIOUS !! HAHAHAHAHAHAH

and guyz... great poems/songs.. lol..

even urs Snitty- it was thoughtful of u to post it up Im sure David Harris would feel quite proud ...:P

Okay sorry Im just pullin ur leg ...:P
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Re: Poetry by the members!
« Reply #16 on: May 25, 2009, 02:30:41 pm »
hey guys, thats really cool!! i do write poems lol!! ill post them oneday...

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Re: Poetry by the members!
« Reply #17 on: May 25, 2009, 02:46:42 pm »
ok, looook at this one it is awesome!! i didnt write it lol!! just got it from the internet....

Pure...... L.U.S.T
I hate how I feel, I hate how I act
I hate how I felt when I saw you
I hate how I acted when I heard there's a chance that I might be seeing you
I hate how it shows, I hate how my heart beats so fast whenever I actually see you, I hate the way I look at you, the way I talk about you.. the way I feel when you touch me or even look at me…
I hate that I feel jealous from others when I know I shouldn’t… its that painful jealousy and pain inside like I wanna scratch my skin open
I hate that I don't talk to you as much as I want and in the way I want eventhough I know how deadly closeness will be...

I hate that its impossible to be with you even in a million years..
Why does this all happen? Why do I stay away for days thinking about nothing but you? Why am I in this state now? Don’t even wanna wake up, wishing that I can see you again.. I know I will and I know it will cause me more pain
I know all this will go away in a couple of days… as it usually does
I know its not love, I know its some shades of lust…
I hate that I see you, and I hate that I don’t see you more often
I hate everything… mostly.. I hate the fact that I want you.


SOOO COOL AND ROMANTIC!! :P :P

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Re: Poetry by the members!
« Reply #18 on: May 25, 2009, 03:43:06 pm »
This one's my all time favorite

Fire and Ice
   
 
Some say the world will end in fire,
Some say in ice.
From what I've tasted of desire
I hold with those who favor fire.
But if it had to perish twice,
I think I know enough of hate
To say that for destruction ice
Is also great
And would suffice.


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oh mehndiya kara dey..
oh jhanjara pawan dey...
On the dance floor oh mundiye...Nach Baliye!

--~*O yaara dhol bajaake.. O yaara jashan mana ke!!




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Re: Poetry by the members!
« Reply #19 on: May 25, 2009, 03:46:28 pm »
see emi :P......even posting someone's poem shows ur personality as if it was urs :P :D

anywayzzz...glad to find many ppl love and write poems as myslef :D lol

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Re: Poetry by the members!
« Reply #20 on: May 25, 2009, 03:48:12 pm »
what do you mean ?
do u think im posting others poems ?
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Re: Poetry by the members!
« Reply #21 on: May 25, 2009, 03:59:11 pm »
what do you mean ?
do u think im posting others poems ?

no no.....i didnt mean u as YOU.....i meant generally......cuz at first u thought that i was posting others' poems as mine, so im telling ya thats its cool to post others' poems......no problem :D :P

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Re: Poetry by the members!
« Reply #22 on: May 25, 2009, 04:04:45 pm »
i dont mind ppl posting others poem but with CREDIT .. and i do make my own poems i;ve almost filled notebooks . you can check my poems here   http://www.flickr.com/photos/devouring/  below each picture .. and its all made by me .
i deleted the post i made here because its original work and as u said post OTHERS poems here so i said i shall remove mine ..

i dont mean harm but im very strict when it comes to crediting ;)

anyways im glad we share the same interest of poem liking
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Re: Poetry by the members!
« Reply #23 on: May 25, 2009, 04:09:37 pm »
i dont mind ppl posting others poem but with CREDIT .. and i do make my own poems i;ve almost filled notebooks . you can check my poems here   http://www.flickr.com/photos/devouring/  below each picture .. and its all made by me .
i deleted the post i made here because its original work and as u said post OTHERS poems here so i said i shall remove mine ..

i dont mean harm but im very strict when it comes to crediting ;)

anyways im glad we share the same interest of poem liking

OH GOD......u got me wrong again :D......urs was awesome, u can post wt ever u wanna post :)

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Re: Poetry by the members!
« Reply #24 on: May 25, 2009, 04:41:51 pm »
Sanity_master i liked ur poems!!
I wrote poems myself so thought of sharing it with u guys


Path of struggle,
Some people struggle to survive,
Others prefer to die,
I chose to be on either sides,
Not dead but considered alive,
Making decisions were always hard,
Society supported no one's part,
Luck stood against me,never showed it's card
This came from a deep feeling found inside my heart,
My poems retell my reality and this is my art,
Group of well organized phrases and words,
sentences build up my entire world
So how effective words can be???
I can descibe it as honey being reached by a bee,
Or a bird flying over an unreachable sea,
Or a humanbeing eating from an irresistable tree
So why can't people see what i see??


Hope u liked it  ;D
If i fall along the way pick me up and dust me off...and if i get too tired to make it..be my breath so i can walk!!

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Re: Poetry by the members!
« Reply #25 on: May 25, 2009, 04:48:43 pm »
Sanity_master i liked ur poems!!
I wrote poems myself so thought of sharing it with u guys


Path of struggle,
Some people struggle to survive,
Others prefer to die,
I chose to be on either sides,
Not dead but considered alive,
Making decisions were always hard,
Society supported no one's part,
Luck stood against me,never showed it's card
This came from a deep feeling found inside my heart,
My poems retell my reality and this is my art,
Group of well organized phrases and words,
sentences build up my entire world
So how effective words can be???
I can descibe it as honey being reached by a bee,
Or a bird flying over an unreachable sea,
Or a humanbeing eating from an irresistable tree
So why can't people see what i see??


Hope u liked it  ;D

AWWWW!! IG girl this is really nice!! Keep it up, u r really great!!

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Re: Poetry by the members!
« Reply #26 on: May 25, 2009, 05:05:03 pm »
Sanity_master i liked ur poems!!
I wrote poems myself so thought of sharing it with u guys


Path of struggle,
Some people struggle to survive,
Others prefer to die,
I chose to be on either sides,
Not dead but considered alive,
Making decisions were always hard,
Society supported no one's part,
Luck stood against me,never showed it's card
This came from a deep feeling found inside my heart,
My poems retell my reality and this is my art,
Group of well organized phrases and words,
sentences build up my entire world
So how effective words can be???
I can descibe it as honey being reached by a bee,
Or a bird flying over an unreachable sea,
Or a humanbeing eating from an irresistable tree
So why can't people see what i see??


Hope u liked it  ;D

AWWWW!! IG girl this is really nice!! Keep it up, u r really great!!




Thanks ;)
If i fall along the way pick me up and dust me off...and if i get too tired to make it..be my breath so i can walk!!

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Re: Poetry by the members!
« Reply #27 on: May 25, 2009, 05:10:09 pm »
wow ig girl, thats really nice .. i liked it
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Re: Poetry by the members!
« Reply #28 on: May 25, 2009, 05:12:28 pm »
hey i have one its called my wet pet and it goes like this

MY wet PET

lol, ill think of something later then post it here
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Re: Poetry by the members!
« Reply #29 on: May 25, 2009, 05:16:13 pm »
Thanks emi....im blushing
If i fall along the way pick me up and dust me off...and if i get too tired to make it..be my breath so i can walk!!