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Offline Angel Of Love

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HELP NEEDED...!!!!!!!!!
« on: August 17, 2010, 02:04:51 pm »
guys so can you all help me writing on yourself like a self potrait for about 400-450 words i started a bit but i don't want it to go too you knoe self obssesed so please HHHHHELP ME..!! :) thanx..:)...
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Re: HELP NEEDED...!!!!!!!!!
« Reply #1 on: August 17, 2010, 03:28:42 pm »
This is one other thing I'm not good at. :-X
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Re: HELP NEEDED...!!!!!!!!!
« Reply #2 on: August 17, 2010, 03:33:04 pm »
Angel,
PMed you again but you're offline now :|
Let me know :)
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Re: HELP NEEDED...!!!!!!!!!
« Reply #3 on: August 17, 2010, 03:34:13 pm »
Quote from: ~Ahana~ on August 17, 2010, 03:28:42 pm
This is one other thing I'm not good at. :-X

We were talking about this the other day :P

I suggest this (I'm pretty good at descriptive writing) : first set a simple scene (like your dressing up for a party).

Next describe yourself whilst you're sitting at your dressing table. Start from the top and move downwards.

Even the smallest detail matters - like the way 'your wispy hair was draped across your gown'

Then end it.

That should be more than enough for 500 words.
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Re: HELP NEEDED...!!!!!!!!!
« Reply #4 on: August 18, 2010, 02:57:26 pm »
thanx dibss..
@nid it's alright..
@ari..thanx that helped i did it that way..

and guys again soory for this but i can i JUST get a starting for the topic: when you were blindfolded on your birthday
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« Reply #5 on: August 18, 2010, 03:01:06 pm »
Think of the 5 senses : hearing, sight, taste, smell and touch.

Incorporate them into the story.
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Re: HELP NEEDED...!!!!!!!!!
« Reply #6 on: August 18, 2010, 03:34:25 pm »
actualy i already know that much i just wanna know a starting paragraph..like "i can never forget the day when......."
that way...please if you can help quickly ari would be great help...!!!
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« Reply #7 on: August 18, 2010, 03:44:44 pm »
Quote from: AOL on August 18, 2010, 03:34:25 pm
actualy i already know that much i just wanna know a starting paragraph..like "i can never forget the day when......."
that way...please if you can help quickly ari would be great help...!!!

When in such a situation its best to talk in the PRESENT tense.

Pretend you really are walking aorund your house as your friends lead you forward blindfolded.

Imagine hitting a chair and the pain you feel, the raucous laughter of your friends, the smell of some Dhai Wadhas from the Kitchen :P

Get it ?

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« Reply #8 on: August 18, 2010, 03:48:02 pm »
lol..that's nice thanx anyway i have to submit the assignment tomorrow it self actually what happened was i knew the body but wanted a attention grabbing paragraph to start with so thanx a lot ari..:) <3
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« Reply #9 on: August 18, 2010, 03:56:14 pm »
Quote from: AOL on August 18, 2010, 03:48:02 pm
lol..that's nice thanx anyway i have to submit the assignment tomorrow it self actually what happened was i knew the body but wanted a attention grabbing paragraph to start with so thanx a lot ari..:) <3

Not a problem.

The best way to get better at English is to read books by major authors and to read a British Newspaper like the Times or The Daily Mail.

Also make sure to watch the BBC whenever you have the time - they are precise and to-the-point in their English. CNN is a bit of a joke. :P

« Last Edit: August 18, 2010, 04:21:04 pm by Ari Ben Canaan »
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Re: HELP NEEDED...!!!!!!!!!
« Reply #10 on: August 18, 2010, 04:20:03 pm »
alright i actually read novels but in these few days i have shortage of time i get loads of homework from the school and all but now i'll start again i have read many books like oliver twist, angels & demons and all...and right now i am reading the da vinci code..:)
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