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Offline saywhatsaykobe

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« on: April 30, 2010, 06:57:27 pm »
I know that you are supposed to give 3 paragraphs stating your point of view, the other point of view, and a conclusion. But what does the conclusion contain? Is it just supposed to repeat what you wrote in the 1st paragraph about why what opinion you agree with? What are you supposed to write and are you supposed to write about why you agree with this opinion cuz isn't that what you're supposed to do in paragraph 1? How is different from the 1st and 2nd paragraphs in terms of points and all that stuff ?
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Re: History
« Reply #1 on: May 01, 2010, 06:52:51 am »
Man u guyz dont have to vote. Just PLEASE. CAN SOMEBODY HELP ME!!!!!!!!!
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Offline Snake

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Re: History
« Reply #2 on: May 02, 2010, 04:04:59 pm »
Lets say the Question is: How successful was the League Of Nations in the 1920s?

Have a introduction paragraph, then take one side (I.e. how it was) then the other in a different paragraph (I.e. how it wasn't) and then your overall view(I.e. it was overall more successful even though it had a few failures)

Quick question, Which century history are you studying and how? 
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Re: History
« Reply #3 on: May 02, 2010, 04:56:23 pm »
20th century History and Germany for depth studies...
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Offline saywhatsaykobe

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Re: History
« Reply #4 on: May 02, 2010, 04:57:03 pm »
What do u mean how???
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Offline Snake

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Re: History
« Reply #5 on: May 02, 2010, 05:12:40 pm »
Your doing the same as me. When I said How I meant how are you revising for History?
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Re: History
« Reply #6 on: May 02, 2010, 05:49:07 pm »
OK so if the question was what you said about the league of nations what would you write in the conclusion???

How am I supposed to be revising??? How are you revising???
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Re: History
« Reply #7 on: May 02, 2010, 06:02:34 pm »
I would write:

I believe that during the 1920s the LofN was more successful than it was a failure. It had more success such as Upper Silesia and Aaland Islands as well as Corfu. While it had a couple of failures such as Vilina. So my overall conclusion is that during the 1920s the LofN was a success rather then a failure.

As for revision I'm making notes and going through them with pastpapers but Ive only finished LofN and TofV till now, with a little of the collapse of the USSR. How about you?
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Re: History
« Reply #8 on: May 02, 2010, 06:14:52 pm »
I'm reading the textbook and going through some notes which my teacher gave us. I have only solved paper 1 past papers till now.

So basically your conclusion will have repetitions in it right. Cuz I'm sure you will have to mention the Aaland Islands and Corfu in the 1st paragraph and the failures in the 2nd paragraph. And then u have to state it again. How do u avoid repeating yourself as far as possible???
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Re: History
« Reply #9 on: May 02, 2010, 06:40:30 pm »
Yea I'm not sure if you can obtain marks in your conclusion, but to avoid repetition I guess use different words and structure your sentences differently.
By the way where (which country) do you live?
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Re: History
« Reply #10 on: May 02, 2010, 06:42:34 pm »
Which country do u???
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Re: History
« Reply #11 on: May 02, 2010, 07:05:02 pm »
Kuwait (Middle east)
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