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see my little bro's story,hez 11 years old
THE STORY OF JIM
CHAPTER 1
THIS MY FRIENDS IS A STORY OF A YOUNG MAN CALLED JIM
HE WAS BORN 1885 IN A VILLAGE IN SCOTLAND WITH HIS PARENTS AND SISTERS
WHEN JIM WAS ABOUT 6 YEARS OLD HEMOVED TO AMERICA WITH HIS SISTERS
THEY MOVED TO AMERICA FOR ABOUT 10 YEARS WHEN HIS PARENTS WERE KILLED BY A THIEF
WHO ROBBED A BANK AND KILLED ANYONE WHO STOPPED HIM.
CHAPTER 2
JIM'S FATHER TRIED TO STOP HIM TO ROB THE BANK BUT HE KNEW
THAT THE ROBBER HAD A HAND GUN AND TRIED TO RUN AWAY
BUT THE MOTHER JUMPED TO STOP THE ROBBER
FROM KILLING her husband when the shot was cleared
they saw jim's mother wounded very badly. the father tried to avenge his wife's death
but failed and died at the hospital near to his wife
CHAPTER 3
Jim heard the news and was angry
the next year he heard the news of a killer and that he was robbing a bank in
his own home town SCOTLAND
jim was ready to avenge his parents death
his sisters tried to stop him he was very angry about that
then shot his two sisters.
he was very angry because of his actions and decided to
go to scotland and stop his endless nightmairs.
CHAPTER 4
Even his departure took a little while
but he didn't give up he finally saw the killer
but he wasn't armed with any weapons
HE SUDDENLY RECOGNIZED his image and drew it.
Jim heard that the killer was robbing another bank near his
hotel and decided to finally avenge his parens death
he finally wnt to the bank and faced the killer
the killer said :I KEPT TELLING YOUR FAMILY OVER OND OVER AGAIN
TO STOP MESSING WITH ME.
jim realized he was german and finnaly killed him
my nightmare is over i have avenged your death father and mother]