Qualification > Languages
Um . what would you grade me on this?
elemis:
--- Quote from: Galleria on October 10, 2010, 01:34:23 pm ---newsletter ? i'd love to read that .
AND OMFG . THAT'S AMAZING . HOW CAN YOU WRITE LIKE THAT ? I SOUND LIKE A GOAT IN FRONT OF YOU!!!
:(
DAAAAAMN .MY EXAMS IN NOV AND IM NOT PREPARED FOR ENGLISH AT ALL !!! :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'(
HOW DO I WRITE DESCRIPTIVES LIKES THAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT ?
I'M DEAD
BYE BYE A*
:( :( :(
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Your vocabulary is good and your plot is simple (which is good). The reason you should keep your plot simple is so that you can develop on it more easily.
Try adding some flavour to it. I can see from your writing you feel a certain disconnect with the topic.
I suggest trying the Narrative piece. For my IGCSE exam (I answered in 2010) I wrote about an Afghani villager whose home and family had been eliminated by the Taliban and how she was trying to get across the border to safety in Pakistan.
I concentrated in the story more on her escape to Pakistan but I also threw in some flashbacks (vital for a top grade)
My ending was a bit emo, but hey :P
elemis:
Also try this : write about a male character at times instead of only a female (you're a girl, right ? :P )
When writing about the opposite sex it tends to generate more creativity and your imagination can run wild ;)
Galleria:
LOL . Yeah but idk if i candle narratives very well. it usually starts so simple at times and goes to bullshitting . lol
seeeend me your work plssss ? i could adapt to your language . :D .
Galleria:
LOL wiiild ?
i dont want the examiner to think my story is vile!!! lol
Arthur Bon Zavi:
--- Quote from: Ari Ben Canaan on October 10, 2010, 01:40:36 pm ---Your vocabulary is good and your plot is simple (which is good). The reason you should keep your plot simple is so that you can develop on it more easily.
Try adding some flavour to it. I can see from your writing you feel a certain disconnect with the topic.
I suggest trying the Narrative piece. For my IGCSE exam (I answered in 2010) I wrote about an Afghani villager whose home and family had been eliminated by the Taliban and how she was trying to get across the border to safety in Pakistan.
I concentrated in the story more on her escape to Pakistan but I also threw in some flashbacks (vital for a top grade)
My ending was a bit emo, but hey :P
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ahha!! I answered the same question in IGCSE..:D :D
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