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Qualification => IGCSE/ GCSE => Queries => Topic started by: Locke Lamora on June 12, 2009, 03:52:20 pm

Title: Recipe for an astar!!
Post by: Locke Lamora on June 12, 2009, 03:52:20 pm

luck, hardwork, mix 'em together, make a soupy broth!
then add a pinch of prayers,stir until they froth!
pour in some concrete syllabus, study-the-right-material;
mix and mix until it does-not-look-like-cereal!
now plop in  some grey gloopy cells,
be careful that you stay-afar;
watch it burst and bubble and boil,
and there's your recipe for an astar!!
                                                  -Myself

Title: Re: Recipe for an astar!!
Post by: Locke Lamora on June 12, 2009, 04:13:47 pm

hello?? ny1 online??

comment plz............ this is my first attempt at semi-serious poetry, im into stories generally..........

Title: Re: Recipe for an astar!!
Post by: DaaDoo on June 12, 2009, 04:17:38 pm

Lol, its very good! ;D
You should get A* for english! :P

Title: Re: Recipe for an astar!!
Post by: Locke Lamora on June 12, 2009, 04:29:53 pm

Thanks  ;D ;D

Title: Re: Recipe for an astar!!
Post by: kam on June 12, 2009, 04:55:30 pm

Quote from: DaaDoo on June 12, 2009, 04:17:38 pm

Lol, its very good! ;D
You should get A* for english! :P

yeah i agree
its awsome ;D

Title: Re: Recipe for an astar!!
Post by: Summer :] on June 12, 2009, 05:17:38 pm

I liked it  :P~ you should've told me that before my exams  :-\
May god bless you with an A* in all subjects  ::)

Title: Re: Recipe for an astar!!
Post by: Monica on June 12, 2009, 10:40:59 pm

yah woteverr u shouldve told us that b4 the exams mate!! lol..but then Oct/Nov students will benefit...lol..goooood

Title: Re: Recipe for an astar!!
Post by: angell on June 12, 2009, 11:08:38 pm

A woteverr - since you take first language :D

Title: Re: Recipe for an astar!!
Post by: Locke Lamora on June 12, 2009, 11:25:31 pm

awww.......Thanks evry1!! :) :)

@summer:
i just made it up (frm 4:20 to 4:40) today!!  :P :P :P

Title: Re: Recipe for an astar!!
Post by: girl_92 on June 13, 2009, 07:15:10 am

its nice woteverr u shuld have put it up b4

Title: Re: Recipe for an astar!!
Post by: thukon on June 13, 2009, 08:16:59 am

i like the words, but the last 4 lines are much shorter than the first 4, so when you read it all together, it sound a little weird. The first 4 together sound good, and the last 4 together sound good too, but together, they sound kinda mismatched. You know what I mean? ::)

Title: Re: Recipe for an astar!!
Post by: aquarian93 on June 13, 2009, 11:17:28 am

i like it :)
very creative i must say :P

Title: Re: Recipe for an astar!!
Post by: Ukhti-R on June 13, 2009, 02:09:00 pm

Quote from: woteverr... on June 12, 2009, 03:52:20 pm

luck, hardwork, mix 'em together, make a soupy broth!
then add a pinch of prayers,stir until they froth!
pour in some concrete syllabus, study-the-right-material;
mix and mix until it does-not-look-like-cereal!
now plop in  some grey gloopy cells,
be careful that you stay-afar;
watch it burst and bubble and boil,
and there's your recipe for an astar!!
                                                  -Myself

Those tips for A levels ...?

Lol... cool....!!