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HELP NEEDED...!!!!!!!!!

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elemis:
Think of the 5 senses : hearing, sight, taste, smell and touch.

Incorporate them into the story.

Angel Of Love:
actualy i already know that much i just wanna know a starting paragraph..like "i can never forget the day when......."
that way...please if you can help quickly ari would be great help...!!!

elemis:

--- Quote from: AOL on August 18, 2010, 03:34:25 pm ---actualy i already know that much i just wanna know a starting paragraph..like "i can never forget the day when......."
that way...please if you can help quickly ari would be great help...!!!

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When in such a situation its best to talk in the PRESENT tense.

Pretend you really are walking aorund your house as your friends lead you forward blindfolded.

Imagine hitting a chair and the pain you feel, the raucous laughter of your friends, the smell of some Dhai Wadhas from the Kitchen :P

Get it ?

Angel Of Love:
lol..that's nice thanx anyway i have to submit the assignment tomorrow it self actually what happened was i knew the body but wanted a attention grabbing paragraph to start with so thanx a lot ari..:) <3

elemis:

--- Quote from: AOL on August 18, 2010, 03:48:02 pm ---lol..that's nice thanx anyway i have to submit the assignment tomorrow it self actually what happened was i knew the body but wanted a attention grabbing paragraph to start with so thanx a lot ari..:) <3

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Not a problem.

The best way to get better at English is to read books by major authors and to read a British Newspaper like the Times or The Daily Mail.

Also make sure to watch the BBC whenever you have the time - they are precise and to-the-point in their English. CNN is a bit of a joke. :P

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