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SF NEWSLETTER JULY 2010
Saladin:
Anyone read my articles ::)
Freaked12:
i will./
nid404:
haha...everyone's is great :)
Fame, didn't read mine? You're so bias :( It's a lil philosophical...but it's mine ;D :P
Alpha:
Okay... The Best Article according to me goes to Engraved for 'Science and Education'. He proceeded the right way. Collected his information from diverse sources and compiled the relevant material to make it a complete whole.
You go down to history, and come back to modern time. You take a whole tour round the world. It was a nice documentary. Sources are well cited.
All the others' were superb too... :)
But I have to select only one best. Or else, I would choose everybody's. ;D
Saladin:
--- Quote from: ~Alpha on July 15, 2010, 03:49:59 pm ---Okay... The Best Article according to me goes to Engraved for 'Science and Education'. He proceeded the right way. Collected his information from diverse sources and compiled the relevant material to make it a complete whole.
You go down to history, and come back to modern time. You take a whole tour round the world. It was a nice documentary. Sources are well cited.
But... still, there's something I'd like to say. Your article seems to be a factual one... Try avoiding the 'I', 'in my opinion', etc. Of course, in a personal piece of writing you can personalize. But Education and Science, the way you've written, is a statement of facts. There are other ways to forward your opinions without using the 'I' pronoun.
All the others' were superb too... :)
But I have to select only one best. Or else, I would choose everybody's. ;D
--- End quote ---
It was more of a personal journey documentary, it is writing to explore.
Using I in this case, is more of a dynamic way to serve the purpose that I intended to create it for.
The balance of fact and opinion is something that I feel, I feel it lacked to create a perfect exploration piece.
But what I attempted to do, and what came out were distinct things.....
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