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Re: SF NEWSLETTER JULY 2010
« Reply #15 on: July 15, 2010, 03:40:29 pm »
Anyone read my articles ::)

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Re: SF NEWSLETTER JULY 2010
« Reply #16 on: July 15, 2010, 03:41:34 pm »
i will./

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Re: SF NEWSLETTER JULY 2010
« Reply #17 on: July 15, 2010, 03:42:30 pm »
haha...everyone's is great :)

Fame, didn't read mine? You're so bias  :( It's a lil philosophical...but it's mine  ;D :P

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Re: SF NEWSLETTER JULY 2010
« Reply #18 on: July 15, 2010, 03:49:59 pm »
Okay... The Best Article according to me goes to Engraved for 'Science and Education'. He proceeded the right way. Collected his information from diverse sources and compiled the relevant material to make it a complete whole.

You go down to history, and come back to modern time. You take a whole tour round the world. It was a nice documentary. Sources are well cited.

All the others' were superb too...  :)
But I have to select only one best. Or else, I would choose everybody's.  ;D
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Re: SF NEWSLETTER JULY 2010
« Reply #19 on: July 15, 2010, 03:53:32 pm »
Okay... The Best Article according to me goes to Engraved for 'Science and Education'. He proceeded the right way. Collected his information from diverse sources and compiled the relevant material to make it a complete whole.

You go down to history, and come back to modern time. You take a whole tour round the world. It was a nice documentary. Sources are well cited.

But... still, there's something I'd like to say. Your article seems to be a factual one... Try avoiding the 'I', 'in my opinion', etc. Of course, in a personal piece of writing you can personalize. But Education and Science, the way you've written, is a statement of facts. There are other ways to forward your opinions without using the 'I' pronoun.

All the others' were superb too...  :)
But I have to select only one best. Or else, I would choose everybody's.  ;D

It was more of a personal journey documentary, it is writing to explore.

Using I in this case, is more of a dynamic way to serve the purpose that I intended to create it for.

The balance of fact and opinion is something that I feel, I feel it lacked to create a perfect exploration piece.

But what I attempted to do, and what came out were distinct things.....

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Re: SF NEWSLETTER JULY 2010
« Reply #20 on: July 15, 2010, 04:08:59 pm »
haha...everyone's is great :)

Fame, didn't read mine? You're so bias  :( It's a lil philosophical...but it's mine  ;D :P

Your's was Awesome.

Almost made me watch american pie again.


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Re: SF NEWSLETTER JULY 2010
« Reply #21 on: July 15, 2010, 04:18:31 pm »
Your's was Awesome.

Almost made me watch american pie again.



Sarcasm transfers well over text  ::)

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Re: SF NEWSLETTER JULY 2010
« Reply #22 on: July 17, 2010, 09:25:44 am »
good one!!! well coordinated..... ;D

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Re: SF NEWSLETTER JULY 2010
« Reply #23 on: July 17, 2010, 09:45:21 am »
good one!!! well coordinated..... ;D

You read the whole newsletter?

I am glad you liked it!

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Re: SF NEWSLETTER JULY 2010
« Reply #24 on: July 17, 2010, 10:00:46 am »
You read the whole newsletter?

I am glad you liked it!

yup i went through the whole newsletter it was awsome.....the mixture of all news, hot fav topics and some intresting articles,.,,,,also some information of the site and it's doings.....well very well done

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« Reply #25 on: July 18, 2010, 02:54:23 am »
yup i went through the whole newsletter it was awsome.....the mixture of all news, hot fav topics and some intresting articles,.,,,,also some information of the site and it's doings.....well very well done

I am really happy that you enjoyed reading it. =]

so which article did you like the most ?

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Re: SF NEWSLETTER JULY 2010
« Reply #26 on: July 18, 2010, 04:30:29 pm »


well..i liked all but the most influencing was
BELIEVE YOU CAN SUCCEED AND YOU WILL - short and precise

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Re: SF NEWSLETTER JULY 2010
« Reply #27 on: July 18, 2010, 06:09:40 pm »
Yayy  ;D Glad you liked it :)

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Re: SF NEWSLETTER JULY 2010
« Reply #28 on: July 18, 2010, 06:28:50 pm »
Great Job!! :D :D

Will read it word-word starting from tomorrow. I really liked the layout. Hope to participate next time :D

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Re: SF NEWSLETTER JULY 2010
« Reply #29 on: July 18, 2010, 06:41:26 pm »
Great Job!! :D :D

I really liked the layout. :D

Thanks.  ;)


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