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ANY BODY! HELP NEEDED IMMEDIATELY! ANYBODY CAN HELP!

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~ A.F ~:

--- Quote from: Nobody on April 24, 2010, 02:54:22 pm ---oh!..you finished your exam...
Sorry to late to say best of luck.. :( :(

so..how was it?


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lol its ok mate ;D

I did great! :D but it was so friggin boring! 5 hours! I have a swollen butt now :P lol

Alpha:
Oops... I think am late, sorry.  :-\

two groups; supporters and opposers.

Should use a colon : here. You are stating the two groups.

ridiculous, due to a myriad number of reasons.

No need for a comma (,). It gives the reader the impression smth is missing here, don't use the comma.

However, those who are in favor of this proposal, argue that smokers’ supports and arbitrary.

are* arbitrary?

who are in favor of banning smoke

smoking*?



Those who believe that this idea is will not affect the environment provided un-proved

That's quite confusing...


But the question remains; will ay party be convinced with the other’s thoughts?

Typo: any*

Suggestion:

You could end with a quote for a title like this. A good quotation will make your essay imposing. And will be stuck in the readers' mind for days...

For example, I had read something like this on the net:

"Smoking in a public place is like allowing a peeing section area in a swimming pool. It stinks! Would you swim there?"

"A cigarette is a tube with a fire at one end, and a fool at the other."

And there are many others... I fail to remember them all now. Just search for Smoking Quotes online.  ;)

~ A.F ~:
thn alot but i guess ure a bit late :P ;D

but really app ur help :D

Alpha:
Welcome...  :)

And sorry for the belated answer. I wish I were here earlier, maybe could have helped effectively.

Sorry again.

~ A.F ~:
No really thank you alpha!

You are awesome! :D

+rep.

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