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Offline Locke Lamora

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Recipe for an astar!!
« on: June 12, 2009, 03:52:20 pm »
luck, hardwork, mix 'em together, make a soupy broth!
then add a pinch of prayers,stir until they froth!
pour in some concrete syllabus, study-the-right-material;
mix and mix until it does-not-look-like-cereal!
now plop in  some grey gloopy cells,
be careful that you stay-afar;
watch it burst and bubble and boil,
and there's your recipe for an astar!!
                                                  -Myself
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Offline Locke Lamora

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Re: Recipe for an astar!!
« Reply #1 on: June 12, 2009, 04:13:47 pm »
hello?? ny1 online??

comment plz............ this is my first attempt at semi-serious poetry, im into stories generally..........
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Offline DaaDoo

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Re: Recipe for an astar!!
« Reply #2 on: June 12, 2009, 04:17:38 pm »
Lol, its very good! ;D
You should get A* for english! :P
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Offline Locke Lamora

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Re: Recipe for an astar!!
« Reply #3 on: June 12, 2009, 04:29:53 pm »
Thanks  ;D ;D
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Offline kam

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Re: Recipe for an astar!!
« Reply #4 on: June 12, 2009, 04:55:30 pm »
Quote from: DaaDoo on June 12, 2009, 04:17:38 pm
Lol, its very good! ;D
You should get A* for english! :P

yeah i agree
its awsome ;D
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Offline Summer :]

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Re: Recipe for an astar!!
« Reply #5 on: June 12, 2009, 05:17:38 pm »
I liked it  :P~ you should've told me that before my exams  :-\
May god bless you with an A* in all subjects  ::)
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Re: Recipe for an astar!!
« Reply #6 on: June 12, 2009, 10:40:59 pm »
yah woteverr u shouldve told us that b4 the exams mate!! lol..but then Oct/Nov students will benefit...lol..goooood
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Re: Recipe for an astar!!
« Reply #7 on: June 12, 2009, 11:08:38 pm »
A woteverr - since you take first language :D
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oh churiyaan charha dey..
oh mehndiya kara dey..
oh jhanjara pawan dey...
On the dance floor oh mundiye...Nach Baliye!

--~*O yaara dhol bajaake.. O yaara jashan mana ke!!




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Offline Locke Lamora

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Re: Recipe for an astar!!
« Reply #8 on: June 12, 2009, 11:25:31 pm »
awww.......Thanks evry1!! :) :)

@summer:
i just made it up (frm 4:20 to 4:40) today!!  :P :P :P
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Offline girl_92

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Re: Recipe for an astar!!
« Reply #9 on: June 13, 2009, 07:15:10 am »
its nice woteverr u shuld have put it up b4
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some people sleep to dream while othrs wakeup to follow dem im the second type how abt u

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Re: Recipe for an astar!!
« Reply #10 on: June 13, 2009, 08:16:59 am »
i like the words, but the last 4 lines are much shorter than the first 4, so when you read it all together, it sound a little weird. The first 4 together sound good, and the last 4 together sound good too, but together, they sound kinda mismatched. You know what I mean? ::)
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Offline aquarian93

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Re: Recipe for an astar!!
« Reply #11 on: June 13, 2009, 11:17:28 am »
i like it :)
very creative i must say :P
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Offline Ukhti-R

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Re: Recipe for an astar!!
« Reply #12 on: June 13, 2009, 02:09:00 pm »
Quote from: woteverr... on June 12, 2009, 03:52:20 pm
luck, hardwork, mix 'em together, make a soupy broth!
then add a pinch of prayers,stir until they froth!
pour in some concrete syllabus, study-the-right-material;
mix and mix until it does-not-look-like-cereal!
now plop in  some grey gloopy cells,
be careful that you stay-afar;
watch it burst and bubble and boil,
and there's your recipe for an astar!!
                                                  -Myself

Those tips for A levels ...?

Lol... cool....!!
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"...And whosoever fears Allah and keeps his duty to Him, He will make a a way for him to get out (from every difficulty). And He will provide him from (sources) he never could imagine. And whosoever puts his trust in Allah, then He will suffice him." [65: 2-3]
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