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French paper 2!!!
crypsAnity:
I went over you essay "love" .. it seemd k.. with just a few grammar error.. ce n'est pas nulle! stop worrying.. n i'll try getting some stuff out to try help u guys... dint start french yet.. but yeah hopefully by tommorow .. InshaAllah
love:
--- Quote from: hyebyekadal on May 22, 2009, 12:29:24 pm ---isnt to short?? any way there are some mistakes concerning the syntax
cuz uve directly translated from English.
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yeh..true...can you tell me ma mistakes plzz....n in section 2 our teacher told this much is enough shud it be long?????......
love:
--- Quote from: crypsanity on May 22, 2009, 12:32:07 pm ---I went over you essay "love" .. it seemd k.. with just a few grammar error.. ce n'est pas nulle! stop worrying.. n i'll try getting some stuff out to try help u guys... dint start french yet.. but yeah hopefully by tommorow .. InshaAllah
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okkayyy...can you juz tell me ma mistakes...
crypsAnity:
well.. to begin with.. you said "c'est tres mignon et mechant" .. first you are talkign about your brother.. you cant use the term "it" .. see it doesn make sense in english even .. so u should use "he is" instead.. which is il est tres mignon et mechant.. secondly.. your grammar .. il a des cheveux noirs, des yeux marron " umm.. you should use the term "les" instead of des.. and yeah you cant say "J'aime beaucoup.." if you wanna say you love your brother should say.. something like "J'adore mon frere beaucoup.."
hmm guess thats it for now.. was few more.. but tehse were the msot distinct.. have to go study physics actually.. hehe.. but inshaAllah ill post few essay stuff when i can soon. till then Take care n dont worry
nid404:
J'ai quelque reponses qui sont approprie. j'espere que ces vous aident (i dunno know to put the accents using r keyboard) And yeah lets converse in french so it'll help us improve r grades and we can get r mistakes corrected.
BONNE CHANCE!!!!!!!!
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