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Re: Description Game
« Reply #420 on: May 21, 2009, 10:45:12 pm »
Time went by - it seemed this moment would never end. He squeezed his eyes shut..he wished to block out the visions before him.
Why couldn't they let him and his son, Alex live in peace? This quiet place, which had become their own pesonal heaven - a refuge from all kinds of disaster!
So they were back, the dreaded Mafia.
thinking hard, it was exhausting.his thoughts where frozen.
Hands shivering, heartbeat accelerating, eyes drooping from exhaustion, he struggled to move, inch by inch, out of sight of these inhumane monsters. His only fear was for his son. He had no wish to continue living - but his son, Alex? So innocent, so sweet. He deserved a chance to live, and Dan was determined to let him have it.He wud die for it!just to let them spare his son's life.
he had to protect his son - if not himself, his son
(Alex's point of view)

Alex gaped at the AK47s in the thugs hands.

"Daddy, they're bad guys!", he whimpered.

Dan hated himself for making his son go through this. It was not fair to the young boy to face all this in such ripe and tender years. Only the Lord knew what imprint this would leave in his young childs heart.

If he lived to experience it.
oh churiyaan charha dey..
oh mehndiya kara dey..
oh jhanjara pawan dey...
On the dance floor oh mundiye...Nach Baliye!

--~*O yaara dhol bajaake.. O yaara jashan mana ke!!




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Re: Description Game
« Reply #421 on: May 21, 2009, 10:45:43 pm »
Time went by - it seemed this moment would never end. He squeezed his eyes shut..he wished to block out the visions before him.
Why couldn't they let him and his son, Alex live in peace? This quiet place, which had become their own pesonal heaven - a refuge from all kinds of disaster!
So they were back, the dreaded Mafia.
thinking hard, it was exhausting.his thoughts where frozen.
Hands shivering, heartbeat accelerating, eyes drooping from exhaustion, he struggled to move, inch by inch, out of sight of these inhumane monsters. His only fear was for his son. He had no wish to continue living - but his son, Alex? So innocent, so sweet. He deserved a chance to live, and Dan was determined to let him have it.He wud die for it!just to let them spare his son's life.he had to protect his son - if not himself, his son.He closed his eyes and prayed.For a moment he thought he heard the sweetest voice ever.It was speaking to him,calling his name.
Words and hearts should be handled with care
For words mis-spoken and hearts when broken are the hardest things to repair

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Re: Description Game
« Reply #422 on: May 21, 2009, 10:47:16 pm »
Time went by - it seemed this moment would never end. He squeezed his eyes shut..he wished to block out the visions before him.
Why couldn't they let him and his son, Alex live in peace? This quiet place, which had become their own pesonal heaven - a refuge from all kinds of disaster!
So they were back, the dreaded Mafia.
thinking hard, it was exhausting.his thoughts where frozen.
Hands shivering, heartbeat accelerating, eyes drooping from exhaustion, he struggled to move, inch by inch, out of sight of these inhumane monsters. His only fear was for his son. He had no wish to continue living - but his son, Alex? So innocent, so sweet. He deserved a chance to live, and Dan was determined to let him have it.He wud die for it!just to let them spare his son's life.he had to protect his son - if not himself, his son.He closed his eyes and prayed.For a moment he thought he heard the sweetest voice ever.It was speaking to him,calling his name.
(Alex's point of view)

Alex gaped at the AK47s in the thugs hands.

"Daddy, they're bad guys!", he whimpered.

Dan hated himself for making his son go through this. It was not fair to the young boy to face all this in such ripe and tender years. Only the Lord knew what imprint this would leave in his young childs heart.

If he lived to experience it.

The voice grew louder. Dans heartbeat accelerated. Maybe, there was hope after all.
oh churiyaan charha dey..
oh mehndiya kara dey..
oh jhanjara pawan dey...
On the dance floor oh mundiye...Nach Baliye!

--~*O yaara dhol bajaake.. O yaara jashan mana ke!!




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Re: Description Game
« Reply #423 on: May 21, 2009, 10:49:58 pm »
but wait... it was fading. Dan jumped up from his position and ran. Ran so fast as his sons life depended on him now. Suddenly he felt something sharp hit his leg. NOOOO, he inwardly screamed. The pain was excrutiating.

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Re: Description Game
« Reply #424 on: May 21, 2009, 10:51:11 pm »
He could feel the hot liquid pour downwards. The smell was making him dizzy.

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Re: Description Game
« Reply #425 on: May 21, 2009, 10:53:49 pm »
Time went by - it seemed this moment would never end. He squeezed his eyes shut..he wished to block out the visions before him.
Why couldn't they let him and his son, Alex live in peace? This quiet place, which had become their own pesonal heaven - a refuge from all kinds of disaster!
So they were back, the dreaded Mafia.
thinking hard, it was exhausting.his thoughts where frozen.
Hands shivering, heartbeat accelerating, eyes drooping from exhaustion, he struggled to move, inch by inch, out of sight of these inhumane monsters. His only fear was for his son. He had no wish to continue living - but his son, Alex? So innocent, so sweet. He deserved a chance to live, and Dan was determined to let him have it.He wud die for it!just to let them spare his son's life.he had to protect his son - if not himself, his son.He closed his eyes and prayed.For a moment he thought he heard the sweetest voice ever.It was speaking to him,calling his name.
(Alex's point of view)

Alex gaped at the AK47s in the thugs hands.

"Daddy, they're bad guys!", he whimpered.

Dan hated himself for making his son go through this. It was not fair to the young boy to face all this in such ripe and tender years. Only the Lord knew what imprint this would leave in his young childs heart.

If he lived to experience it.

The voice grew louder. Dans heartbeat accelerated. Maybe, there was hope after all.

but wait... it was fading. Dan jumped up from his position and ran. Ran so fast as his sons life depended on him now. Suddenly he felt something sharp hit his leg. NOOOO, he inwardly screamed. The pain was excrutiating.
He stumbled and fell heavily to the ground, his useless left leg dragging him down.... the thugs gathered over him and his son.....

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Re: Description Game
« Reply #426 on: May 21, 2009, 10:54:41 pm »
He jumped up and karate chopped all of them. WHAM WHAM WHAM - Just like Bruce Lee.

He stumbled, but continued running. They had shot him. The pain blinded him. If only he could run long enough to reach his car, he was sure he had a shotgun in there. He could feel the hot burn of the keys in his pocket. If only he could make it.
oh churiyaan charha dey..
oh mehndiya kara dey..
oh jhanjara pawan dey...
On the dance floor oh mundiye...Nach Baliye!

--~*O yaara dhol bajaake.. O yaara jashan mana ke!!




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Re: Description Game
« Reply #427 on: May 21, 2009, 10:56:43 pm »
he felt the warm lifeblood seep out of his leg, the soft whimpers of alex, who had his face snuggled deep in his shoulder, and turned over to protect his son from the hail of bullets ........

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Re: Description Game
« Reply #428 on: May 21, 2009, 10:57:05 pm »
lmaoo
whammmmmmm
wheres wotteverr??? hellooo ..man we need you!

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Re: Description Game
« Reply #429 on: May 21, 2009, 10:57:52 pm »
lol, we differ in each continuation

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Re: Description Game
« Reply #430 on: May 21, 2009, 10:58:00 pm »
oh lol 8)

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Re: Description Game
« Reply #431 on: May 21, 2009, 10:58:37 pm »
Let him reach his car already!! :P then he can run run run;)  n we can have a chase scene! Yayyyy!
oh churiyaan charha dey..
oh mehndiya kara dey..
oh jhanjara pawan dey...
On the dance floor oh mundiye...Nach Baliye!

--~*O yaara dhol bajaake.. O yaara jashan mana ke!!




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Re: Description Game
« Reply #432 on: May 21, 2009, 10:59:08 pm »
angell, ur too optimistic...... just lemme make the readers lose hope..... ;D ;D

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Re: Description Game
« Reply #433 on: May 21, 2009, 10:59:48 pm »
u dont drive, do u?? u hav to hav BOTH ur legs nd feet intact.... ;D :D

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Re: Description Game
« Reply #434 on: May 21, 2009, 11:00:18 pm »
n if he turns around, and his sons at his shoulder, they're goonna shoot hs son down. what a father.
oh churiyaan charha dey..
oh mehndiya kara dey..
oh jhanjara pawan dey...
On the dance floor oh mundiye...Nach Baliye!

--~*O yaara dhol bajaake.. O yaara jashan mana ke!!




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