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The genre is speech .The writer purpose is to draw attentions of the citizen to know the the rights of the women and how important they are .the writer has adapted a very serious and motivational tone throughout the passage .the writer has directed towards the audience who are well educated and can help to fight for their rights and a wide class of people .
the openeing sentence of paragraph itself potrays the theme of the passage quite well .In line 4 and 5 comas are used to show the effect and various professions women are into and also speakers trys to motivate audience that women are now in every field
In line 6 to 13 the writer becomes more specific and exaggerates that women are everywhere and are more concern about their children and family ,this gives emotional appeal towards audience .
In second paragraph contrasting words are used united us than divided us .this gives more more effect to audience as women have all common intreset so they are more united .
In third paragraph writer gives information for why the audience are attending conference and this gives audience a accurate knowledge and make them more attentive .
in line 22 to 27 let them is indirectly linked to the goverment official and politician of the world who disrespect the women, as writer is not using a conterversial lines that can cause a problem so she is just respecting and using words let them as audience can understand the writer to whom the writer is pointing out .
In line 32 to 38 the writer gives information how important these conference how they made changes in peoples lives , this creates a sense of responsibility towards the audience .
this much i have writen so please can you check and give me grade and my weakness point
