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can anyone give me idea on this essay?

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--- Quote from: Ari Ben Canaan on August 30, 2010, 07:22:38 pm ---For your IGCSEs you wont have the time to write a story/essay with such a complex plot.

Aim to keep it simple, use good vocabulary and build on a relatively simple plot.

Simplicity is the name of the game - you have a word limit of like 500 words max for Paper 3 for the creative writing section.

Everything else (Summarys, letters etc) need to be one and a half page to two pages long max.

An Examiner isnt going to correct anything beyond the word limit and excessively long scripts are PENALISED.

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I don't disagree with that. But many candidates can manage perfect English. What will make the difference between an A and an A* is your plot. Your creativity, your ability to keep your reader riveted.

And yup, like Dibbs said, using flashbacks surely gives a more mature impression.  ;)

The ideas, people have already overloaded you.  :) If you can, try to add something unexpected at the end.

rickyponting66:
thanks Chingoo! + rep!   ;)

though i am reading ur though after submitting my essay :D but somehow ur idea was similar to mine..
i'll get the result tomorrow, lets see... hmm..!

Dibss:

--- Quote from: Chingoo on August 31, 2010, 01:59:34 am ---:o Now my stalker is buttering me...I might be on your next iftari menu :'(

EDIT: Just realized you have already written the story. O0 Ain't I an idiot. Hope I helped anyhow  :P

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LOL x 2 :D It might help someone else in the future :)

rickyponting66:


can anyone explain the meaning of this topic?
i will make idea myself but i cant understand the topic :/

elemis:

--- Quote from: rickyponting66 on September 25, 2010, 07:33:48 am ---

can anyone explain the meaning of this topic?
i will make idea myself but i cant understand the topic :/

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Basically the main character in this plot is experiencing difficulty in moving up a beach.

You know that movie Saving Private Ryan ?

 Remember the intro scene where the soldiers are clambering up the beach head whilst being shot at by German machine guns.

Basically, that scene was describing the D-Day Normandy Landings. You could use that as the basis of your story.

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